

Moments later he sees the second one, this is a young male, and as Jason Gatsby watches him from across the road, the terrible feeling of sadness intensifies, two of them separated by Crows Crossing Road. It is then when an idea comes to Jason, he goes to the car and takes out his flashlight and falls inline directly in front of the female, he softly begins to talk to the male while flashing the light on and off repeatedly.. “She’s over here buddy!” suddenly as if on cue the male stops and turns to face Jason Gatsby, and then begins to walk slowly towards him, and for the first time in years Jason Gatsby can feel his own heart beating inside of his chest, and he knows that he is alive. The male apparition passes by, within three feet of him and pauses slightly to look directly at Jason before continuing on. the female has now seen the male and has begun to walk towards him and when the couple appear to stop and reach out to touch each other, Jason Gatsby has an epiphany. They pause to look at him before disappearing together from view.. Jason rises to his feet and quickly changes his flat tire, and when he starts the car he finds himself stopping once again twenty feet later. He takes the cell phone from his pocket and calls his wife, and when he hears her voice it calms him. And as they talk he turns the car around and heads for home.. “Honey? I love You..”

Scratch A.B.T. Copyright© 2006.

Comments:
ReplyDeleteSuperb!
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by Daisy (PM , CC ) on Saturday October 7, 2006 @ 12:01 PM (del)
Good morning Daisy thanks for visiting.
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Saturday October 7, 2006 @ 12:10 PM (del)
great addition..sad...Cracker
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by cracker (PM , CC ) on Saturday October 7, 2006 @ 6:47 PM (del)
thank you Miss Cracker.
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Saturday October 7, 2006 @ 7:08 PM (del)
beautiful...i'll come back...after bit...i bookmarked this...really good visual...i love the fingers touching...
purple
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by purplefly (PM , CC ) on Saturday October 7, 2006 @ 7:11 PM (del)
thank you for visiting the place of Crows Miss Purplefly. come back any time you'd care to.
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Saturday October 7, 2006 @ 8:36 PM (del)
You have so very many good stories! It isn't just the stories...it never ceases to amaze me...really astound me...how you can put such stories into such a beautiful display of words.
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by HeatherScot (PM , CC ) on Sunday October 8, 2006 @ 1:04 AM (del)
thank you for the wonderful comment Heatherscot, and for visiting the land of Crows..
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Sunday October 8, 2006 @ 2:33 AM (del)